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The only thing that bugged me was this sentence - "It fills you to excitement to the point where you think you’re going to implode." I'd change the first 'to' ...

Aww thank you (two), making me blush here :) It's so nice to hear since I write for my readers first most - not myself :)

For those who want to read part 2, check this out :)

And I'm back with part 2. This time you'll follow Adam as he ventures out to find his master a fitting meal... It will of course be harder than it ...

Gosh, this just went straight to my heart (over-emotional.) It was just very beautiful and I think everyone can rely to it - at least I did. :) Do you ...

Thank you Loveless :) I'll be occupied with some tests at school this coming week but after that I will work on part 2, it will have some action, yay! ...

Thank you for the review, I appreciate it dearly ^^ Actually once I read through my own text while looking at the sections and things you pointed out - I ...

~A feast fitting for a wolf~ He held the tarnished goblet in his pale hand; he twirled it and shook it hard enough to make its content drip onto the ...

Hello! This is my first story to submit here, hope you'll like it. Anyhow a short summary would be clever, no? The story takes place during WW2, it revolves around ...

I actually enjoyed this, I wasn't expecting it since I'm not to fond of fantasy stories that takes place in the modern world, I like it hardcore, haha :) But ...

Hmm, this is my first review and thus I just want to say: wonderful. I like the whole tone and the language. The way you've written it on is somewhat ...

Hello everyone! :) I'm new to this site but I've known about it for quite some time now, but I just did not have the courage to join - until ...