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Hey SimonF, Below are some corrections and suggestions I made that I believe are only about grammar. Hope this review is helpful! 1."He was always so fascinated about being Buddhism" ...

Great story KaelynPerkins03! This story was heartwarming and descriptive, although I wonder if you could just skim over your story and fix your spelling mistakes. I also noticed you switched ...

Hi DylanMichaelis4, I am going to review as I read, so sorry if things seem a bit off. The edits I make will be in parentheses, since theres no bold ...

Hi, First off, your story contains lots of dialogue, most of which is not necessary. When you take out some of the dialogue, you could have more room to explain ...