scotty.knows

That was strange... The first part is seemingly disjointed dialogue, the meaning of which I am quite unsure. Full of sentence fragments and utterly confounding bits of trivial fact. I ...

Hey, yeah, I liked it too. Of course... I lost about 50 testosterone points reading it... but I liked it. I liked wondering if either Jen is crazy or has ...

This was great. I laughed pretty hard at most of these. Probably the best part is the sheer randomness of the comparisons. WTF all the way. This was probably the ...

*Dies* *Revives self* *Dies again* Oh my god... When I said someone could make me gay, I was only kidding, really, just to let people know I didn't care what ...

Leave it to Tiger to come up with something off the wall and totally bizarre like this. There were a few grammar errors here and there, but all in all, ...

Yes, this was interesting. I really like the idea. The grammar and spelling were fine. I didn't catch any obvious errors. A good job, there. It seems a little too... ...

Hey good job. This was interesting. Does Aly have a psychic link to her cat or is she just plain psychic and able to read everyone's thoughts? Because if she ...

Their so... Should be, "They're so" pizza box filled kitchen. pizza box-filled kitchen. As far as composition errors went, that wasn't too bad. It was pretty short, though. It's hard ...

Hey, this was alright. You didn't really make a point, you just kind of laid the grounds of what is happening and that it sucks. The spelling and grammar was ...

I have just done a cut and paste edit. The things I've changed are in bold. My peers at school comically call me Lucretia- which happens to be humorous only ...

This reads a lot like a music video would play. Perhaps that's where you met your inspiration. I like it this way better. It's a little clearer. One thing though, ...

Yeah... it does seem as though it's lacking a little color. You might include mold on the walls, in order to add some greens. Maybe a TV screen? But most ...

Well I read it. I liked it too. Not in the sense of "Oh this was great, I think I'll reads in front of my church" great. More thought-provokingly dark ...

So sad... I really don't have much to critique... There were a few spelling/grammar errors. Vices muttered in her head. I'm pretty sure you meant, voices, not vices. She tried ...

Aww... now I have to go get laid and put your book down since I'm a boy... I liked the second one better, with the exclusion of numbers five and ...