scotty.knows

I agree with you. Content and structure has pretty much been covered by the users above me, so I don't have much to say. You need to work on your ...

:( All the people died. *Chuckles to himself* Is it just me, or has I Am Legend spawned a whole series of "The last person in wherever" stories. Ah well, ...

I liked the poetic nature of your piece. I didn't necessarily agree with the philosophy behind it, but it sounded nice. I am not 12, so the vocabulary was within ...

*Shudders* Oh no! What's going wrong with the Mars skyscraper-tower boo-wah facility? This wasn't bad as a prologue. It presented a conflict and something that is going horribly wrong. It ...

Hello and welcome to YWS. I say, you are a Svede? How interesting. Okay, like a lot of first posts we get on the YWS, this is pretty short and ...

Lol, this wasn't bad. It was certainly unique, but it reminded me a little of that movie, Monster . xD Well, this popped into my head when Suz said there's ...

Oboy-oboy! Chapter ten is here! Alright, this was good. You shed a little light on the inner workings of the revolutionist movement and gave us a little background on Maria's ...

Lol... Okay, that was kind of weird. It did intrigue me, I have to say. If not for it's sheer obscurity and total unpredictability, it intrigued me. Now that I've ...

Hello robo, welcome to YWS. Yes, I definitely agree with Mantis. You don't want to give away the best part of the story on the back of the cover. You ...

Aww... was kind of sad. I liked it though, it made me think. It's like one of those, "Yay-neigh" rhymes. Actually, if you reworked it as a poem, it might ...

Lol, you read my book so I guess I'm in permanent debt to review every single thing you write for the rest of your stay at YWS. Yeah, this was ...

Okay, this was interesting. It wasn't very long, so I won't complain about that, I'll just point out what should be changed. First of all, I'll do your grammar/punctuation for ...

This was cute. At YWS, we get a lot of emo poems about suicide, death, and betrayal; this was a pleasant change. Of course, it needs a little work, but ...

Well I have to say that I liked this. I'm not familiar with the term, Gonzo Journalism, but I liked this. It was an interesting look into something so reviled ...

Okay. I don't want to complain or anything, but you really need to go back over and Capitalize names. You capitalized Desert Eagle, but no names? It's just a little ...