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  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Last Time

    Hey Great poem keep it up. I think it may need one or two more lines to finish it up. But that's basically all so keep it up. Also hope ...

    Mar 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Life Is A River

    hey a few things that could improve your work would be: 1. To make the poem flow ( you have almost got it but it needs to be improved) 2. ...

    Mar 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: Silent Pain

    This is a really good poem. I love how you have put the words together. But to me it needs extra. Maybe another line or two

    Mar 1, 2014


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