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This was fantastic :P I loved Bella's speech, but I wish Ebony's had been better. I mean, with fanfiction like that, you could have completely ripped on Tara's writing - ...

Hi Horseradish :) I'm Jai. “John?” he whispered sadly, as if moaning only to the mellowed wind. Hmm. Can a wind be mellow? Can a whisper be like a moan? ...

Plot Generated: Your story is about a soldier at the bottom of the ocean kicking someone in the face. Word Count: 934 ----------------------------- "Our Search and Attack Unit has been ...

Seems like YWS gets around ;)

I'm in my first year of university. I didn't say my review was better than yours, I said that my review would hold more ground than that of friends crying ...

I've decided to type and eat, so here I am, reviewing Chapter One. Something that I forgot to ask earlier - how did Ayra know that Saphira was with the ...

Hi Fantasy. Welcome to YWS. First, when you look at wall of text like that, what do you feel? I know what I feel - intimidated. To eradicate this feeling ...

Hey :) You've had some awesome reviews on this already, but I couldn't help but drop by and leave my comments. “Where are you, coconut? I know I've found you ...

Hi BornToShop. So, I noticed you had a few loud problems with my review. I address them here. I am also going to just quickly review it as well, because ...

Wow, this was a huge change. It was definitely more descriptive and it has very much improved. The only thing I could find on my first run through was this: ...

Hey Georgie :) I have to say, this looks like a very personal piece, and I don't know how well this would be received on YWS. Fiction/prose like this is ...

Hey :) I'm Jai and I hope you find my review helpful. By age seven, I could recite every single detail of it. The starting was absolutely perfect, I could ...

Hey :P I waited a while for someone else to review this and leave a fantastically helpful review, but it didn't happen, so you're stuck with my review which is ...

Done, Apple (well, I've reviewed, we're still waiting on Patch, Azrael and Dexterra to catch up). Blue Jay by Apple Under review. 1/4 Musketeers have reviewed so far.

Hi, Jai here, one of the Four Musketeers, upon your request at our WRFF thread. First, I suggest hiding in a spoiler at the bottom of your post your author's ...