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Your plot sounds good so far :) Listen - you'll have to research all of this yourself - one of the biggest pains of being a novelist, sure, but you'll ...

Me again to check out your work. 1) I like this better than the other half of the Prologue 2) This half is written better, and it sounds like you ...

Hey :) Nice little story you got here. I found a few holes/errors/things I didn't like, and so here they are. Have fun :) --------------------------- Prologue part one: The Day ...

Aedomir - thanks for that :) *overwhelmed* Thank you Jabber!!! Wow - you went to INSANE lengths! Thank you thank you thank you *kisses ground at your feet* *sigh* I ...

[pre]Hey guys - just putting this up to see if it's any good. . . like - you know, it's good to have more input than my kid sister or ...

Nice! This was really awesome! It was nice and simple, and it struck a chord in me somewhere =D *claps* ... *shakes head* This WAS really cool - so much ...

Hirsch. . . do you mean Hearse? As in the wagon/car that carts around the coffins? Otherwise, I liked this - jai -

Herro there! :) I'm baaaaaack! Okay - to your story! ---------------------------------- The city Tristan called home was built on the edge of the frozen sea. Most of the surface buildings ...

*shakes head* You will grow addicted to slow claps, my friend :) *claps* Another excellent peice of work! If you're churning out chapters this fast, and this good, I won't ...

*slow clap* ........ *shakes head* ........ *more clapping* This is terrific writing. Absolutely excellent. The story drew me in straight away. The stories from all sides is also riveting. See ...

I loved this! Outstanding work! If I had picked this up in a bookstore, I would have bought it no matter the price! I love the main character, and the ...

*head/desk* I only got it AFTER DoctorClicky said something about a medical condition ^^" Very good twist (after I reread the ending after a while to see what I missed ...

*laughs* It's great to see people actually taking into consideration all my suggestions! *scratches head* Yeah - in Australia we call periods fullstops - my bad. Okay - here's my ...

Wow. That was mesmerizing. I couldn't tear my eyes away from it. Outstanding. I couldn't find any mistakes, either. Have you finished this story? Are you going to post any ...