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i agree with the above. don't repeat unless it really makes sense. the second time you said this: was unneeded because you already said it. "We nodded hello and walked ...

i liked it but, i agree with everyone above. you need to lengthen it and give more detail to thierl ove Spellbound by your stature (whose the man, woman?) of ...

okay i like the idea you have going on but you're packing to much at one time. i know because i do the same thing. i say it and i'm ...