serenephantom

Thanks for the review. I do want to start off by saying a few things that seemed to be lost within your reading. The whole story is a story that ...

As far as I remember that is. I actually haven't been on here since 2013. But that's now it worked in 2013 soI'm assuming it's the same. Would you review ...

Sorry, I was just replying from a request for a review from the review trading center, but I still do hope that these points help you out in the long ...

Thank you for the helpful review. I had some thoughts about the first chapter and although it is supposed to be confusing I can understand the point that it might ...

Sorry for the double reply, I have no idea how this website works anymore.

Yah I know I should have edited first well i had done some but to tell the truth this story is over 52K and i wrote it for NaNoWriMo and ...

Thanks this is the reason i'm putting this up so that people can tell me sentences that don't make sense.

thank you so very much, you made my day....

Thank you I know my grammar needs work but I type the way I speak and people switch tenses constantly when speaking so i'm using that to make it more ...

Thanks I know I have grammar issues and stuff this is the first time I have gone through this. I figured I should at least anwser your questions. 1. A ...

thanks i know my grammer sucks

thanks yah my grammer sucks i know that and this website makes the doc come out weird, but thanks for following

thanks yah my grammer sucks i know that and this website makes the doc come out weird, but thanks for following

it is no where near finnished thais was 1/3 the first chapter i can finnish it in a day

thank you for the suggestion and such, and Eli is a boy it clearly states in the second paragraph I am not a child i am a full grown man. ...