serenityinthesky

I really enjoyed reading this. The imagery was very vivid and clear. The characters are developing nicely and I'm anxious to read more. I'm guessing as you write more you're ...

wow. this is amazing. I really like it and feel i can connect with the feelings you express here. I also can feel a sort of connection with nature with ...

Wow! The way you described the instrument was awesome!!! And I guess I can relate except my clarinet is a guy. haha. In fact, his name is Benny (after Goodman ...

Well the whole point of your lyrics are for them to sound good as a song. In that respect, I think you've done a very fine job. I can really ...

Haha well you know the title just kinda caught my eye!!! :) But I really liked this!! I'm not the hardest critic around just because I'm def. not the best ...