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Run through once, look through twice, Keep both your eyes policing. Take your hands into a cloud, make them look like their missing. Wrap your shame in its mask, its ...

Personally, I don't think it should take a massive striking fear of "Armageddon will come sooner if you don't conserve energy!" to make people do that, everyone should so it ...

Glad to help :) Oh, and I did put it in paragraphs, but for some reason the indents disappeared.

He's just as lost as you are, Trapped in the world, an endless maze. Everything around is like a blurry haze, People without faces, people without change. They all try ...

If I were to tell you that a crazed, armed killer cloaked in black would be walking down the same street as you are within the next 5 minutes, then ...

The first four lines were okay; they described well and had a good feeling. However, I really would've liked it more if it was longer, because you just suddenly end ...

As a fellow teenager, its like my life in poetry :P But, as a critic, I would have to say that it could have gotten more work. Some of the ...

I loved the way you described the environment, the setting of a war because it really captures that feeling. However, it could have been a tiny bit longer when describing ...

Granted, but you develop amnesia the next day. I wish that I had another bulb for my ceiling light.

Here's my (3) lines. That was it, the end! Actually, not. The shortest book in history will certainly not be this one. A bit random, but hey. That was pretty ...

I consider this my 'first' poem, I have done some other ones but they were for practice and none were really finished. Critique! __________________________________ To lie in endless wait, I ...

For me, I would like to study psychology because other people's thoughts and feelings are so interesting, but I dont know if I want to be a therapist, maybe a ...

Hello there. Im Ralph and I am here to better my writing skills, because I've only been writing for about...a year or so. Short poems, descriptive essays and right now ...