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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Trouble, My Favorite (Chapter 1: Pain)

    Hi, there! Okay, so first of all, you have a decent opening. My suggestions for you as you go on, or if you want to edit it further are: 1. ...

    Jul 21, 2011


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