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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Trouble, My Favorite (Chapter 1: Pain)

    Hi, there! Okay, so first of all, you have a decent opening. My suggestions for you as you go on, or if you want to edit it further are: 1. ...

    Jul 21, 2011


When we are children we seldom think of the future. This innocence leaves us free to enjoy ourselves as few adults can. The day we fret about the future is the day we leave our childhood behind.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind