shadowspinner

Excellent, I really enjoyed it. There were a few things I noticed however... He could ask an eagle for directions, or converse with a dog of cat. did you mean ...

Theo Heart - Thanks for all the help. Although I have been writing for years now I sometimes forget to consider those basic questions (especially during the summer when my ...

Right, yes, that would make sense. Does it work that the major connection between the characters is the ability to hear the voices? Or should I have the protagonist be ...

Thank you! That was really helpful feedback - I'll definitely be making a few changes. I see what you mean about the ending, too. I forgot to consider that, standing ...