shaunsthepoet1

Poetry » General, General Re: Betrayed A Dream
Hey there Musky. Nice poem. You will get very far. A few tips: Focus on how you form some sentences. Stanza 1, line 5. Instead of "So, I left it ...
Aug 24, 2016

A big mountain of sugar is too much for one man. I can see now why God portions it out in those little packets.
— Homer Simpson