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If it's true that you're just sixteen, congratulations! This is a wonderful write-up for any sixteen year old. I'm almost trapped into believing that this is an autobiography rather than ...

Although this is termed a narrative, it reads more like a charter of beliefs in some constitutional document. There isn't a storyline to speak of except that you went through ...

AceOfPayds, your style fascinates and holds our attention. I got involved in your story enough to waylay me into believing I was really with Aveline. That's good! Congratulations! As I ...

A short-story that ended too quickly! A story that led me to ask for a more that wasn't there! Perhaps, he needs to reopen the case! Or has he given ...

Kaju, your short story is interesting! It's braver to write from imagination than from experience. It's also more difficult! I see that you've written the plot from imagination. Congratulations! Peopl

Eros, I envy your storytelling style. How I wish I could write like this! It aroused my interest and made me curious. You're good! Having said that, the idioms you ...

What an exciting start to the story! I liked the way the story describes the rebellious feelings of Shang Shou towards his elder brother. Although the story is not explicit ...

Akshata7, I'm new to writing too. So, I wonder if I'm really qualified to review your work or help you in any way. Still, here goes: This is a beautiful ...