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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Cat's Cradle

    Very very good so far but just a few mistakes Nestled deep within the warm straw, a young female was cured into a ball, her belly large It should be ...

    Jul 7, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Year of 2089

    This is very good except a few errors “Cool, my name is Claire. What’s ours?”To the United States because the leader of North Korea took to much control and torture ...

    Jul 7, 2008


It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.
— Albus Dumbledore