silentwords

Wow, I loved this poem! The flow and serene tone to it was beautiful. Each line flowed perfectly into the next. I also really liked your title, and that is ...

This is a lovely song! The lyrics and word choice is beautiful (: I actually think this could make a good song. The only thing about posting lyrics on here ...

This was a really well-written poem! The emotion was very strong and powerful. The story behind it kept my interest throughout, and the title drew me in. There weren't any ...

I will be honest, that I was a little confused about what this poem was about. Is the person hallucinating/ dreaming or are they dead? I wasn't too sure :p ...

Okay, so I finally finished writing part 2! Sorry that I took so long.. I have been pretty busy lately. Anyway, if anyone is interested in reading it, here is ...

I am not using this post anymore. To read the full story click here: Thanks a lot! :D

This is the second part of my short story. Sorry that I took so long to write it. I have been kind of busy lately. Anyways, if you want to ...

I loved this story! You're an excellent writer, and if you didn't say you wrote this on your ipod in a hospital I would never have guessed. The story kept ...

I really liked this poem! It had a spooky feel to it, that really drew me in. I also personally love rhyming poems, and thought your rhymes were nice and ...

Aww, this was cute! Considering you were only five when you wrote this.. I thought it was pretty good :P Ahahaha! I don't even remember what my writing was like ...

Ouu I really liked this! It had a creepy intensity. The story throughout was very interesting and kept me wanting to read more. I also really loved the description and ...

I thought that the ryhmning here was actually not that bad! You did manage to find good rhyming words (: I did find that the flow wasn't perfect though in ...

Ahahaha I loved this!

I actually really liked this. It was really short, but you still managed you put a lot of emotion in this. Of course I think that you could expand on ...

I really enjoyed this poem! There story behind it was very interesting, and I thought you gave the poem a very nice and strong tone. You also had some really ...