silentwords

Loved the poem! :) The story was great, and you had some really good imagery. It was easy to see what was happening. I liked the way you rhymned some ...

I loved this poem! It was well written and I liked how one line fell into the next. Everything was very connected. The idea/story of the poem was great as ...

Wow, this is amazing. There was so much honest emotion, that I thought I was going to cry. Of course, do not change a thing, it's perfect the way it ...

First off, I love that song, which is why I read your poem. Ahahaha. Secondly, your poem is really good! I loved it. The flow and imagery were both great. ...

Wow, I really loved this poem! There was a lot of emotion and passion. I think that this is a very relatable poem. It is easy to connect to and ...

Wow, this was so good! There was so much emotion, in such a short story. This was a great representation of love, and I think that everyone can relate to ...

I really enjoyed this poem, especially the story. It was really well-written. The ending was my favourite part But I'll stay here just for you. I will... ..Just lie and ...

I know you said you didn't really care for this poem, but I actually really liked it. If this is "bad" to you, then you other work must be very ...

This was a very well-written and thought provocting poem. I really enjoyed it :) I couldn't find anything wrong with it, so I won't be much help. You definetly have ...

I really liked this story. I know that this wasn't your point, but I found it very easy to relate to. I share a lot of the same thoughts and ...

Ahahaha! I really liked this, it was short and sweet. Just one small suggestion: Or else will take a hike! I would change the will to I'll. That's only my ...

I really enjoyed this poem! I think that the idea and story were really good and interesting. I just have two small suggestions: but I can't live among them all ...

Very cute poem! I liked the story, and I really loved the ending. I thought it really tied everything together. Great work! Theres only one grammatical error that I found: ...

Wow. This poem was really well-written! It gave me goose-bumps. Ahahaa. The rhyming and rhythm were really good. I only have a few suggestions: my patience worn I think you ...

I thought this poem was really well written. You also managed to write it in a way that does not offend people that are against abortion, like myself. You portrayed ...