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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Nine

    ShadowTalon- NightWing SeaTalon- SeaWing IceTalons- IceWing (which I remind you, are not blinded by night) Maybe if you’d want more followers, you should try reinventing completely the clans, with d

    Jun 10, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: I'm a Writer-Poem about loving your passion more then yourself

    My friend.. this is amazing (๑>◡

    Jun 9, 2019
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Pink and Yellow

    This is an interesting story to be sure. I feel like there’s a second meaning behind each word you said, and the writing is definitely well done. We feel the ...

    Jun 9, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Lohikarmen: A tale of humans and dragons (Chapter 6: New life paths)

    this story is my new favorite. i just love the setting, and i also find dragons beautiful beasts, with a temper you carefully describe all throughout your chapter. I have ...

    Jun 9, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Lohikarmen: A tale of humans and dragons (Chapter 5: The Great Hunt)

    My new favorite! Definitely subscribing :) I hope you keep on with the great content. I still have a question tho. This is chapter 5; but the one following is ...

    Jun 9, 2019
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: Little Turtledove (2)

    Absolutely loved it :) I rarely finish a short story, since usually they’re loud, bland and stupid- but this one is quite a read. Now, the setting in the beginning ...

    Jun 9, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Achievement

    RHYMING SCHEME OK, I know my friends usually turn towards me when the teacher talks of writing poems, and I’m probably the first to coldy point out that a poem ...

    Jun 8, 2019
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: What's all the buzz about.

    i appreciate a good story, and this certainly is one of them. We've got stakes, we've got plots, and we've got characters. Until there, all set. Now, even though I ...

    Jun 8, 2019
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: My First Solo

    I really like this story. Unlike casualties, this actually can make us dream- flying is, yes; something of a dream- and the way you describe it is really appreciable. The ...

    Jun 8, 2019
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Greatest King

    Heya Dilbert64- this is what I call a short story. Compelling, short, and yet unforgettable in its way. Now, there only are several points which itches me while reading your ...

    Jun 8, 2019
  • Short Story » Narrative, Spiritual Re: Sight

    Hello hello So to begin with, I really liked this story because the tone is set easily and we feel things for.. Tajiti..? Anyways, if you made a part 2, ...

    Jun 8, 2019
  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: Wrong Call

    Hey there, so; unlike the other reviewers who basically said very thing I wanted to say about the vocabulary; I’ll rather go on about the plots. I think you make ...

    Jun 8, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Lohikarmen: A tale of humans and dragons (Chapter 4: The ritual)

    I cannot express how impressed I am about this. A plot which moves forwards Characters which develop, share, love, hate, have inner conflicts- basically, characters Even though the setting is ...

    Jun 7, 2019
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Red Rose- A Short Story I wrote a few months back and decided to go back to polish it a bit (Final Edit!)

    That story, with the twist at the end.. is.. good.. I mean, we get the tone pretty well, but since there are no actions, and it’s just people talking.. it ...

    Jun 7, 2019
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: A broken friendship

    My friends see me as someone which prefers Stephen King, tumors and gory kills over romance in movies and films, although I also love romance, broke friendships, lost sister stuff ...

    Jun 6, 2019


The most important thing is to have fun! Stress makes for distress and neither of those belong in writing!
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