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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Lemon-Yellow Sun (draft 2)

    Thank you so much for all of your suggestions! 1. You have a major problem with punctuation. Put a period somewhere or a comma if it's needed. I totally agree! ...

    Feb 26, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Giving Nothing Back

    Thanks for the advice! I just wrote this yesterday and was really happy with the first two stanzas, but I was unsure what to do with the last ones. I ...

    Apr 20, 2008


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