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Hi there, I think your story was very action-packed. I liked how you used an active voice instead of a boring, passive one. I was sucked into it from the ...

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Hi there, I think your story was very action-packed. I liked how you used an active voice instead of a boring, passive one. I was sucked into it from the ...

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DragonWriter22, You are SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO wrong. That is one of the greatest poems I have ever read. It is so much better than I could do. You have so many rhymes ...

This is a great story. This story has great description and was very interesting. I am so hooked. I can't wait for more of this. Keep up the great work! ...