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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Can nobody hear me?

    No voice called out to greet me Across the blustery breeze My favorite! 'Ello! I really liked your poem. I wish it did not relate to you, because that would ...

    Oct 7, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: End of Summer, End of Me

    'Ello! We were halfway down the street when I realized that I had forgotten to brush my teeth. I love this as an opening like. It almost made me laught, ...

    Oct 7, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Behind The Looking Glass: The Awakening (Chapter 1)

    I am wordering wha is going to happen next, you left me with that. All i have to say is you have serious gramatical errors, and im too lazy to ...

    Oct 7, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: You Never Loved Me.

    ->I don't know if this is actually good, so tell me the truth.

    Oct 6, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Red

    I honestly don't think you should have a comma between "Hours" and "Over the dead." It sounds like you don't know how to put comma's in. It definantly sounds better ...

    Oct 6, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: A Last Time...

    Hiya, again. Well, lets see. Your story was very cute, and different. The fact that you live in India gives you the ability to venture into different places I cannot. ...

    Oct 5, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: It Ends Tonight

    This is most definantly not plagiarism. I did not go and pick lyrics from songs and make them a poem. That is plagiarism.

    Oct 4, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Miracles

    Don't count on these being right, but somethings don't sound right to me. Here it is, finally. My light. And from it comes beautiful amber-winged butterflies, that hold blue orbs ...

    Oct 4, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Floating

    Hiya! I have to say, there is nothing I really need to correct in your poem. If I can make one slight suggestion, though, it is that you add some ...

    Oct 4, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Half Of You To Hold

    I didn't get the chance to read your second chapter, but im sure its just as magical as the first. Your dialogue is amazing. Everything the characters said sounded like ...

    Oct 4, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: It Ends Tonight

    ->You may be wondering why the words are capitalized when they are not. Every line is a song title on my iPod. If you dont believe me, i can post ...

    Oct 4, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Dear Juliet pt.2

    'Ello, " Yep, Romeo, prince of Thalspar." Pretty sure a Princess would not say Yep! consider changing it to yes. It is far more formal. " No, not that. The ...

    Oct 3, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Dear Juliet...

    "Such a beautiful creature, but I shall not be tricked by such selfish courtesy. This be the prince from the other kingdom. I'd rather be alone than dance with such ...

    Oct 3, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Happy Memories

    Hello! If my grading is not precise, dont listen to it. I did my best! We were staying with our uncle in Steamboat to do some skiing. Yeah, this sentence ...

    Oct 3, 2009
  • Media Reviews Re: The Best Book Ever Read

    There is this book I read for a school project in the 6th grade. It is for a younger age group than I am now, but I can't stop loving ...

    Oct 3, 2009


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— Edwin Morgan, From the Video Box 2