skip.the.words.

Hey, I liked it. It was not very descriptive. I felt like you wrote this so quickly just to get to the main point. If you are thinking about continuing, ...

It's the end! * * * “Stop! Hania! Come back.” I woke with a start. The sun was beating down on my eyes. “Kaya!” He ran to my side. “Are ...

GROSS! Haha, just kidding. I liked it. Your story is definantly original, especially compared to any other work I have read on this site. Your description of death, and the ...

most of the gramatical errors in this piece were on purpose. I am writing in the perspective of Kaya, and she is a Native American in the late 1700's. I ...

My story fit into three subjects. I opted for none of the three. It has one more part. The story will not make much sense until part two is finished. ...

Shalom! Oh goodness. When you started off, i was scared because the first paragraph sounded like the story I am writing. It isn't, though, thank goodness. I did notice any ...

I like it, is she saying no to his proposal though? i dont know why but usually i think of 'shaking your head' as no. I guess that not right ...

Thanks much! yeah Alter is not very good at rules. haha This site seems interresting and i cant wait to post! im a perfectionist, so my first wont be comming ...

Oh, goodness. Don't we all wish we could write something like this, publish it and make money? It would be so much easier than a novel. I loved It! Your ...

Hello! I would like everyone to call me Skip, just becasue it sounds better than 'word' or 'the'. I am a true Californian, and I live in the greatest town ...