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  • Poetry » General, Action / Adventure Re: the road of memories

    hey there oh my i really loved this one! the simple idea of familly road trips turned into a cute lovely poem like this one is great. parts i found ...

    Oct 28, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: my younger self

    hello there i just want to say that this piece is very simple yet brings lots of emotions and i can relate to it! i mean anyone would relate,right? everyone ...

    Oct 28, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Safe Place

    heyooo i hope you're doing just well! i'm here for a review let me just tell you that your poem describes well the lonliness felt by people sometimes, when they ...

    Nov 22, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Rainy days

    hello there first of all i want to say this piece is just AMAZING! i loved the idea of this poem it's very unique and i kind of find it ...

    Nov 22, 2018
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: It's Not Just A Game !

    hey there i was searching in your works and this was what i found catchy, because i just love football i first i thought you're talking about the american football ...

    Nov 8, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The View from Here

    hello there i wanna say that your poem is the best well-describing piece about depression out of all those i've read.WHY? because of all those details you gave,you used very ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Another Winter

    hey there this is a lovely someone who loves winter and snow i found this very fresh and pure something you could imagine and live easily while reading the lines,it ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: You and I

    hellooo :D reading the title makes me remember one direction's song,it's very good btw. back to reviewing,THIS IS SO SAD but i love it,the content is very true and powerful ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Twisted Lives.

    hey there,smile here with a review :D SO,i really liked the idea of this poem, very enjoyable and kind of scary ( in a good way) "Born from the lies ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Shadow Friends

    hey there so this is a nice piece of poetry,it flows good tegether and i enjoyed the rhymy parts. for the theme and the use of words i think it ...

    Jun 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Humor Re: Writer's Block

    hello there, smiley is here for her first review since ages of laziness so, i'll start with nitpicks: -"i cant think coherent thoughts " should be "i can't think of ...

    Jun 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: 1

    hey there this is such a nice poem,its idea is awesome and no , not pointless, it made me smile!! the way it's written and how i kept READING...just , ...

    Jun 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: Why I'm called anonymous

    Helloo smiley is here for a review :-) Ok , first off i wanna say that this is truly amazing poem , i find the idea so attractive , the ...

    Mar 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Empty Hands

    hello there wow this is super AWESOME piece that i really enjoyed reading , the idea , the title , the rhymes they're all important parts that made your poem ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Out in the Cold

    HELLO THERE smile is is here for a review , okay so this piece is so deep and true , it describes well how you can feel when your lover ...

    Mar 30, 2014


It's easier to come up with new stories than it is to finish the ones you already have. I think every author would feel that way.
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