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i like this poem but i can see why you and your friend took it different ways. It could relate to a person who has returned to a physical place ...

i love this poem. I think it shows what every girl goes through from one time to another. My life is complicated in a simple way, that is my favorite ...

i found this poem a bit confusing. i understand that you are talking about how confusing freedom can be but i think there is further you could go with this. ...

Hello, i think that this is a great opening to quite an exciting book, you have already identified that this story needs expansion. i would suggest having your main character ...

Alternatively this chapter is written from the view of Nixie Blue. Please read the first chapter before you read this one because it may not make sense otherwise Chapter 2 ...

So far i have only read the first paragraph of this story and i am hooked :) it grabs you straight there as soon as you start reading that there ...

hello :) i haven't read the first part of this book so sorry if i get anything wrong:) I really like the character of abigail in this story she seams ...

i understand the plan and have started a novel (please view gods gifts on my page) but don't have any idea where to go with it :( what do you ...

Thank you Beth :) i really appreciate your comments and I'm glad you like the story. yeah now that you've brought it to my attention that line does sound a ...

Hello Isitlove :) thank you so much for your help :) i'm writing another chapter now, i just want to see the reaction to this one before i continued. don't ...

thankyou So much anchor. again you have been really helpful :)

i love the opening to this section. I have looked at doing a part of a story like this but i love the sincerity of the character Cole :)

This is a new idea i am working on tell me what you think of it. Thankyou Chapter 1 – Enya Wood The echoic hall lent it’s acoustic to bouncing ...

i'm really sorry but i don't quite understand this poem. I find it a little confusing, i understand the term of metaphor but i just don't see the links, though ...

oh my god how do you do stuff like this. I love it :) do you need special equipment. the only thing i would say would be i would leave ...