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It’s a mighty cliff and quite a fall But after all we’ve been through A powerful three words were shared Then another three just to say how much we care ...

Three A Small Blue Book Heavy breathing and a crash is what Mr. Carson awoke to. He maneuvered his way out of the knot his sheets had him in. He ...

Hey! Thank you so much for the reviews! I honestly opened this piece up, thinking, hm...this seems intersting. I forgot that i had even wrote it--so i posted it. Now, ...

I am at a loss for words ...this was more than incredible. I loved your message, the voice within the piece, the rhetorical questions I loved loved loved it. I ...

I felt--how should i describe this--connected to this piece. I honestly loved the overall message and your way of getting to the point--everything. I do agree with nova though-- I ...

Hey, okay so let’s see—for starters there is a little miniscule grammar mistake, you forgot the y in the word “they” in the “Each day the flew higher” sentence, no ...

I felt a good connection to this poem, especially sense I know a girl who lies a lot, but it kind of relooks at the idea of reality, lies, truth, ...

I utterly loved this piece—I almost want to illustrate it… I noticed that most of the little grammar mistakes have already been pointed out, but I hate grammar and didn’t ...

If I could give you an A plus I would—I just loved this piece! I almost think it should be longer… Hm, I don’t know, just a thought. It may ...

Well I absolutely love this piece! I can really connect with it considering how I can sit at a blank document for hours and hit backspace more times than I ...

Its not exactly finished--so please just take a shot at it ;D -Thanks When I look back I see your laugh When I hear your steps, it’s as if I ...

Hey, i really realte to this poem, sorry if that's a little weird. Anyway, I can completely see someone thinking this if you were trying to put a mental image ...

Wow i really loved these, did you take them yourself? If so, was it with a digital camera or a Nikon film based camera. I have taken dark room photography ...

Hey i really really liked made sense and it was so beautiful, i really felt what you were trying to say. I do have a few inputs though. I dont ...

I think this is very good, but almost needs more of a middle, if you know what I mean. I think you jump into the point to quickly and it ...