snowtiger

Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: 14 Songs Chapter Three
This chapter was good- I just think you're rushing it. An all-too common mistake. She hated him, remember? She shouldn't be hugging him in c3. Just something to think about ...
Jan 27, 2011

I never travel without my diary. One should always have something sensational to read in the train.
— Oscar Wilde, The Importance of Being Earnest