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Re: Untitled: Chapter 1
First, i want to say that i really like the intensity of this! You have a great opening paragraph and i like the way you subtly add in characteristics of ...
Nov 4, 2014 -
Re: Point Of View
First, i really like how intense this is! It reminds me of the movie The Purge, which is really good. Now review time! this sentence is reallllllly long, you could ...
Nov 3, 2014