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This was kind of a weird thought - what would happen to your perspective when you'd watched couple after couple get together (with your love-arrows in their hearts) only to ...

Moved to Romantic Fiction... please check it out! :)

Um... wow. That's all I can say. Well, okay, maybe not all. I also have a question: is this based on a true story? It really has that feel to ...

Hey! Awesome to meet you. I'm MademoiselleKool, but you can just call me Kool if you want. Or Sarah, which is my name. I saw your very nice, tactful yet ...

Wow - that was great. I loved the overall tone of the piece, and the dialogue was very realistic. I really liked the quiet strength (cheesy phrase, but it fits) ...

Nope, older. Yay for me! The person below me knows what the capital of Bulgeria is.

Actually...I unintentionally, through writing Orson, gave him a quirk where he phrases questions as sentences. That is, it's a question but he inflects it like a sentence. I understand - ...

Well - the one major thing I noticed in this chapter (besides its awesomeness) was that Orson's speaking style seems to have veered towards colloquial. He was always very honest ...

“I don’t understand,” said Corseley after some length. “Do you now?” said Orson, smiling at the politician. Should be: "Don't you now?" because Orson is convirming what Corseley said, so ...

Hey there! Overall, I thought this was a good story - well written, engaging, smooth, flowing style, and easy to read. I also really like your character - the reader ...

May seem a bit cliche at the very beginning, but please keep reading! I like to think that I'm a little off the beaten track with this one. I got ...

Hahahaha - does "BHM" stand for Big High Master? Or am I waaay off? :P Sorry, I couldn't help it - just when I saw BHM I immediately thought of ...

Okay, my first question (to be asked in a very irritated tone) is... why on EARTH haven't you continued this? You're just getting to the good part! While it's true ...

YO! Haven't checked this out yet - Welcome. Good to know all about you. :P Pm is ON THE WAY! :D (yeah, call me random, but I just felt like ...

*Sigh sigh sob sob* That was so sad! Excellently written, of course, but saaaad. :( Only one thing I didn't like (other than what everybody else pointed out already): Brit's ...