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Re: Trapped
Hmm, it's not bad, the initial paragraph is particularly powerful. However it's all a bit wordy and readers get caught up in the description when the story is impeded because ...
Sep 25, 2012
Hmm, it's not bad, the initial paragraph is particularly powerful. However it's all a bit wordy and readers get caught up in the description when the story is impeded because ...
Sep 25, 2012
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