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I surrendered to the shafts of Sleep which bright Pain could not penetrate; blissful numbing of the mind. Curtains rose before the screen of all that I could not have ...

I'm not that guard who could stand and cry, "You shall not lead me there!" My sword sleeps now. My bow broken. My arrows are spent, and I unfold. This ...

I think this was good. I must say your much more sympathetic and forgiving than I would ever be! I think the only thing I could say with grammatical errors ...

This was good. If you didn't say it was a Reservoir Dog rip off I probably wouldn't have been thinking that, but I definitely would of had Tarantino in my ...

So I read this poem as if this character were losing their superiority mind set and imagination of perfection and coming into contact with a greater wisdom. As if this ...

I thought this was really good especially with the fear of darkness emphasis. Anyways as I was reading this poem I felt it was so strong and when you put ...

I thought this was good. I thought the ending was strong. The only problem I had with it was that you say "First, peace is but a break within the ...

I thought this was amazing, although I have to agree that the last line just doesn't work. I think it's a good line though. Obviously I don't want to tell ...

I thought this was really good. The only two things I didn't like were 1.The title. and 2. When you use conjures in line 11. The word didn't seem to ...