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  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Wolf (Temporary title till I can find something)

    Anything by the name of wolf or werewolf would catch someones eyes, but you could use a name for wolf or werewolf in a different language like greek or Italian. ...

    Jan 17, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Clumsy

    Great! It was a perfect and sweet poem. Short and sweet. I loved it and would love to give you points for it. I won't though because my points are ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: ---

    I love the title. I love the fact that you would do that to the title of a post and that is a good way of telling that you care ...

    Jan 2, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Clouds of Chalk

    The entry to this poem was very exciting for the first part and at first I thought you were talking about love, but when I kept reading I noticed that ...

    Jan 1, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: Evening of Christmas

    Great song. I barely have anything to say about it but great work. The peice itself is a little bit neat for a few lyrics and you use the words ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: Land in flames

    Good job. For those who like a twist in their song, everyone will like this piece. The words were great and I think I would give your overall song a ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Glance

    Great piece of writing that you have made and that is fantastic what you have done with it. I loved the piece and it touched my heart so deep that ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: White Witch

    Wow! A beautiful drawing made by a true artist. The picture itself is fascinating and the thought of you doing it on the computer make it even more inspiring. Great ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Rain

    An extremely descriptive piece and the punctuation and notation of the words and sentences were executed perfectly. I hope that you will write more stories in the future so that ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Ocean

    Fantastic story but the punctuation was off and I would definitely count you off on that. Um there really isn't anything else to say besides good job and keep up ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: Party in the Mist (lyrics)

    Yeah thanks! I'll try to change that, but in the mean time I need to write a story.

    Dec 29, 2010
  • General Articles Re: My Special Biography

    Fantastic story my friend but i wish it would be more exciting. I'm into exciting stories with a twist at the end. I would give you 40 points for overall ...

    Dec 28, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Dragon Story

    The overall story is fantastic but sometimes the words get jumbled and it get's hard to understand. The overall qualities of the book are great and I think you could ...

    Dec 27, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: Party in the Mist (lyrics)

    The sky in shining blue, and I look over at you. There's a rainbow in the sky. Mist is clearing now, tears roll down your cheek, but I've had enough ...

    Dec 27, 2010


here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings