sophiamh

Amazing! I think you used line breaks very effectively to emphasize and make your poem more dramatic. I really like the last two lines: Maybe they can't forgive me./ And ...

A moment of triumph As words spill from my fingers. The ideas now seem ready to burst. It’s wrong. All wrong. Time to sink into despair. I could really relate ...

Great! However, you messed up your rhyming scheme in the last four lines. I'll wait for you without explanation, Without wavering, with all faith firm. When'ere I think of thee, ...