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Re: Confusions Chasing For Resolution
This is really good. The rhyme scheme flows really nicely, and reads like an inspiring piece of spoken word poetry. One of my particularly favorite set of lines is "I'm ...
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Re: left me cold and dead [i wanted you to be better]
wow,this is so visceral and precise. the imagery you used, such as "it dips curved blade under the breastbone/pulls through the meat exits the pelvic floor" is so vivid and ...
Mar 31
