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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Five Bars in Rome: Letter to an American Soldier

    Wow. That was so amazing. You have the most wonderful ability for capturing real and honest emotion in fiction, and some people just can't do that. I felt as if ...

    Jun 10, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Callie/Bulemia

    Okay, I was bored in Digital Photography today so I got on the computer and just threw this together, it's kind of random and bad, but I thought I'd post ...

    Jun 10, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: deleted

    Hey! Okay, I'm not going to critique your story paragraph by paragraph like Monki...I'm more about the idea behind it and the plot than the grammar. I think that it ...

    Jun 10, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Powers ::4::

    Wow. At first, with the whole potato and meat ration thing, I wasn't sure where you were going with it and I was like, ummm....but wow. That was really well ...

    Jun 10, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Audition

    I walk into the room Finally I have been waiting Outside In the fluorescently lit room Sitting On a cracked, vinyl chair Waiting Just waiting With a sea of kids ...

    Jun 10, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Becca....

    I walk through the front door and immediately know something is wrong. “Becca?” Mom calls. She appears in the doorway. Her honey colored curls are brimming with gray and the ...

    Jun 10, 2008


You walk into this room at your own risk, because it leads to the future, not a future that will be but one that might be. This is not a new world, it is simply an extension of what began in the old one. It has patterned itself after every dictator who has ever planted the ripping imprint of a boot on the pages of history since the beginning of time. It has refinements, technological advances, and a more sophisticated approach to the destruction of human freedom. But like every one of the super states that preceded it, it has one iron rule: logic is an enemy and truth is a menace.
— Rod Serling