spiritblackwolf2705

Really great...leaves me breathless every time. Nothing wrong with it at all, no errors to point out. You're a special person, you can get me to stop playing guitar hero ...

Your welcome.

Also, I have not been spending much time on this website lately. I don't know why, maybe it's because I joined a new rp site....or maybe I'm getting tired of ...

Like I told Canis, I've been really busy lately, tests and all that school crud. I'm planning on working on it soon. I'm hoping to have it up before Christmas, ...

Very good, I think Canis and Azila covered pretty much everything else... ~Spirit

Omg, thank you so much! I fixed the "wanna"

That was great. There really isn't anything I can see wrong with it, but than again I'm not good as giving long critiques. Keep up the good work! ~Spirit

Ah, Wonderful and funny! I love this story, it keeps me interested and waiting for you to post the next one. Keep up the awesome work! ~Spirit

EDITED again!

EDITED! Lol, Well I just added two new stanzas.

Thanks. She doesn't know that her loved one is dead yet, because she is sleeping, well falling asleep.

Hmm....Pretty good. Although I got lost, I liked the descriptions you gave. ~Spirit

Hmm...I'm not trying to be harsh but the only things I could really get about that piece is that you were betrayed. You didn't tell how you were betrayed, only ...

Very good! Your writing shows your emotions, which makes it all the better. ~Spirit.

Thanks! For once I didn't do a rhyming poem...