spottedpebble

I still think about this poem all the time

I really love this and I think the picture you used as the cover matches the poem perfectly!

I stumbled upon this somehow almost 20 years later and I cannot believe it doesn't have any likes! You'll probably never see this comment, but I'd like to let you ...

I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of this story if you decide to post it! ^^ The concept is so interesting and I like the suspenseful way you ...

I don't have time to write a review right now but I would like to make a comment. I am enthralled by this poem. It feels like a photograph in ...

the lore for this ship is so cool :O

This made me cry

This is an interesting concept, and definitely something that I'd be interested in reading!

Introspection is a fluid thing like water. Look into your reflection in that water. Watch the ripples break it into pieces. There is so much to know about the things ...

I really like the concept of someone's unwanted and unneeded apologies taking form as a sharpie scrawl on a monument to the person's hapiness :O This is so good.

I, too, crave more

Modern love—not even just romantic love, but platonic and other kinds as well—has felt quite fake to me too lately. It's like you said, everyone fears being seen as too ...

Candy Necklace is a really fun name. Also, I like how you didn't only write his thoughts but showed his uncomfortable feelings by describing him hugging his arms to his ...

What a wonderful piece and wonderful use of imagery (and consonants)! The descriptive imagery in this poem is so lovely.

How ominous... this reminds me of a time two years ago when I was visiting my grandparents. One night we all gathered in a field in the dark trying to ...