spottedpebble

Wow, that review ended up being way longer than I thought it would be! What can I say, this poem really moved me. :)

Wrote this on September 18th, 2024 (I wrote this poem as I was standing outside watching the events described)

Thanks for the review and the advice about the tone! I'll keep that in mind. (also I love the style of your review and all the colors)

I feel this.

Thanks! Your feedback on the punctuation is very helpful, and I will adjust that now. :)

Written 10/5/23. edit 10/17/25: this is a very personal poem—which is why I've never given any context behind what it's about—and I'm not sure why I published it on here ...

Such a clever comparison. Halloween and the Internet.

Thanks, those suggestions are extremely helpful! I've never written a horror story like this before, so I'll keep your suggestions in mind for next time I try to write a ...

Thanks! You really understood the poem and I'm glad that you were able to see that the "community of like-minded people" is YWS.

*Presses like times twenty*

This is awesome!!

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Thank you so much! ^v^ Also, I noticed that you tried to include a quote. If you want your quote to look like this insert quote here , put [quote*]insert ...

Sorry it took so long for me to reply, but I love your review! Thanks!

Thank you!