squarened

I really like the direction you're going with this so far. It really does have that Alice in Wonderland vibe to it. I like your descriptions and all the little ...

I would change absolutely nothing. This was breath taking, and so unique. Your prose is very poetic. I love your descriptions. They're so lush and vibrant. I'm in love with ...

Wow, what a beautiful story! I just really love your attention to detail --especially this line: It was early November. Just cold enough that the girl could be outside without ...