stagnanturanium

Yes. I loved what you wrote. So simple and true. Everything that happened in this poem was out of your (the narrator's?) control. Maybe it wasn't the intention, but from ...

Pozoe 12, I began to read your story, and saw a competency in diction most my age can't reach, and a natural storyteller's fluidity that is unteachable. The way you ...

Hey, I liked your poem, especially that nice twist at the end. I just have a few grammatical suggestions: "But strong of pride she held." "strong of" sounds strange, possibly ...

I think that you could have gone without an omniscient narrator. It feels as though this model is writing in her diary, not that a poet is taking her diary ...

I'm no poet, but I'll just write my initial impressions of the piece. I like the presentation of a short sighted desire for affection (Just for Today) put alongside the ...