starlitskies

I completely agree, well done! ^;^

'I don't want heartbreak, > present tense I don't want tears. > present tense I just wanted the truth, > past tense (using wanted instead of want) Without all the ...

I really like this. While it's simple and a bit choppy, I feel that the writing suits the nature of the topic that way. The tense change in the third ...

Thank you so much for the review! ^;^ It means so much to hear, I really appreciate your feedback.

Thank you so much for the review! It really means a lot to me. ^^ Imagery has always been something I've struggled with, so that is lovely to hear. Thanks ...

I read the revision, it's absolutely gorgeous and flows so nicely. ^^ Well done!

Thank you very much for your review. ^^ I have been working on imagery so I'm extremely thankful for your feedback.

Why thank you for the review and compliments. ^^ That is an endless debate for me, as I personally lean towards no capitalization while other people prefer it, haha. I'll ...