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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: You're Not perfect.

    i agree with the comment above - you changed tenses a few times but that can be changed if you review the story again. in my opinion, the story seems ...

    Sep 29, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Look Left- Chapter 1

    This is so interesting, especially how Java is dealing with her mother's death. It's confusing as well in parts but I'm sure it all will become clear soon enough :) ...

    Sep 28, 2009


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