stupidiot92

Hey, thanks for the comments. I'm posting chapter 1 now so take a look.

alright thanks and a couple things -you find out about the sunglasses later -werewolf is different from wolf its humanoid so it has a hand like thing paws wouldnt really ...

finally got around to reading this i liked this small, nice, and very repectful to the veterans and even soldiers still serving

yea i saw Bullet, Atreyu, and Avenged Sevenfold all in the same concert... they are all in the top 5 bands i listen to... i had trouble talking for a ...

P.S. i'm listening to Hero of War right now!!!!!!!! "A hero of war, yeah thats what i'll be and when ill come home they'll be d**m proud of me"

wow... they range from heavy alternative music to screamo so yea they have a variety and i like it all what about Bullet for my valentine or Avenged Sevenfold?

yea Worth Dying for was the song that got me into them Prayer of the Refugee- ive never met anyone that didnt like it swing life away- was put on ...

this is the third piece of poetry ive read by you and it is amazing just like the others i wish i had the ability to shoot poems off like ...

I don't know. I don't want people to look at it and think, "Oh someone else has written a cliche hero story again." I think I am gonna stick with ...

wow i'm pretty sure i know what this poem was about and it was well written just one thing i saw both too much but never not enough you can ...

Thank you all for editing this especially tonysdg for it being your first. I will edit this when i can(hectic holiday season). I have gotten no reviews for chapters 2 ...

wow... really good lyrics i mean REALLY good lyrics and i love the end just curious but what type of music is this gonna be with?

This was good. I like how you describe how ugly and horrifying the world is than completely turn it around. Rhyme and Rhythm are a bit off here, but not ...

This was a god one. The horrors of having certain freinds. I like the title and the way you described how a freindhsip gets ruined.

This poem was good, but needs a little work. The rhyme and rhythm are that good in it. I would suggest working on that and i think that is all ...