stygianmoon17

YES YES YES A poem about horses !! This made my day

Ohhh I can see the conflict coming This was AWESOME The tension was great, I have no idea what the writing exercise was, but this was just wonderful. I really ...

Hi there MissGangamash :D This is a very powerful message you've handled to the perfection. Message-wise, it was perfect. You talk about some issues that are given awareness, but that ...

Yay a script :DD I was so excited to read this, scripts are so rare on this site unfortunately :( Anyways, on to the review ! I'm no specialist in ...

OH. MY. GOD ahhh the art is so beautiful, the map looks like a gorgeous rainforest and the colours are just so gradient, so soft, so incredible !! You're so ...

Ooh I love this There was so much tension in this chapter, so much suspense- I can't wait to know more. This chapter was built so perfectly, with a balanced ...

Hey there MC :) I decided to come drop a little comment on your more recent works since it seems we never seem to be able to meet in the ...

Holy sh- That's one hell of a way to start a chapter 0-0 The action was thrilling, the description was clear, never too cluttered and always flowed nicely, and the ...

Oooh interesting I love where this is going, truly there is always action in every single one of your chapters, it's awesome ^^ The action was impeccable and gripping, the ...

Hey there, your poem really made my day :D Each verse of yours is quotable, they're all so unique and yet fit so well together. The imagery is vivid and ...

Hi there :) I saw this in the green room and am here to take it out of there :P more so since it's a really interesting story ! You ...

Hi there :) I believe this is the first story you've ever written, or at least posted on this site, and it's incredible ! It was short, just as a ...

Hi there :) For a weird reason, this reminds me of a movie I've recently watched. It's called Devil (by M.Night Shyamalan,) and it's got the same premise. People are ...

Hi there ! In such a short amount of time, you managed to give each character a distinct personality, and although we know nothing about either of them, the main ...

Hey there :) You are way too modest, that's one of the sweetest poems I've ever read ! I loved the flow of this poem, the sentences are short and ...