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summerdepressionexe

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Fall - Chapter One

    I apologize if I got any of the Spanish wrong, I used google translate since I myself know minimal Spanish.

    Mar 20, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Fall - Chapter One

    Mar 20, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Prologue

    Yeah, this chapter was pretty short just because I needed to get some information out before I started with the plot, but other chapters will be much longer. Thanks for ...

    Feb 18, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Prologue

    Thanks so much for the review! I always love hearing what people think of my dialogue because it is not really my strong suit. Also, Valeria and Nathaniel were not ...

    Feb 18, 2023
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Monsters

    *I am*, I have no clue where all the random characters came from, apologies.

    Jan 12, 2023
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Monsters

    Thank you so much for the critiques! After rereading the poem, I totally see where all of your criticisms are coming from; I constantly forget what tense I%u2019m writing in ...

    Jan 12, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Goodbye Poem.

    Hey! I absolutely loved this poem! The whole piece felt very emotional and genuine. The rhyme scheme also gave this poem a really nice flow. Thank you for sharing this ...

    Jan 12, 2023
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: grow

    Hey! I really love your poem; it encapsulates the feeling of being a teenager very well. Your word choice is absolutely phenomenal and it provides such beautiful imagery! Keep writing ...

    Jan 9, 2023


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