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Re: Moonlight Romance
"It was an amazing shutter than ran up and down my spine." You should instead write.."It was an amazing shutter of happiness that ran up and down my spine." otherwise ...
Aug 11, 2008 -
Re: No Tears, No Pain
this is a really incredible story but i believe that at the end you need to leave alittle bit more to the imagination, like its pretty obvious that he dies ...
Aug 6, 2008 -
Re: Scars That Never Heal
this is really good, i really enjoyed reading it. are you making a new section??
Aug 6, 2008