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Re: What's Wrong?
wow this is absolutely amazing!!!!!!!! you should make it into a book because it is so freaking good. I wonder if you could have made it a little more suspenseful ...
Mar 15, 2016 -
Re: Three Years : By Olivia Sozio
i like your character and your story is very interesting but i wonder if you could have some more detail and i am also confused about what your focus area ...
Mar 15, 2016 -
Re: Lost Girl
this story is soooo good and i love the journey that ling goes on your historical facts really help explain buddhism i like your characters a lot and bijong especially
Mar 15, 2016