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  • Article / Essay » Culture, Other Re: College app Essay :l

    Hey! To counteract this I always proclaimed I wanted to help people: perhaps go more in-depth as to why you want exactly to help people or what moment instigated you ...

    Jan 5, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Butterfly Love

    Hi! I love corny stories, perhaps try to be a bit more descriptive of how both characters look or the colors around. Describe scenery and try to ease into the ...

    Jan 5, 2020


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