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I like it. It flows pretty well and it's really sweet. Good job!

I loved it. Very prett, well written. My favorite part, "Your skin so pale against the night....invites me to shed all that I held as swim with you in Night's ...

thanks! :D

thanks! :D

thanks! :D

thanks! :D

thanks! :D

thanks! :D

thanks! :D

Like the people before me, this is a great first try. Kitty caught all of the mistakes I caught, but I liked it all and all. Good job! :)

This...was beautiful. I liked it a lot. Like the people before me said, there a few mistakes, but the idea and way it was written was wonderful. I liked it ...

Wow...this was really amazing! I loved it. I'm usually not super into poetry, but this is really well done! I loved the feel of it and the wya it flowed. ...

I absolutely loved this! I actually felt the emotion rolling off of this piece! You did have a few mistakes and you repeated some words a lot, but I barely ...

thanks so much! I'm really badwith punctuation and stuff, so I'll work on that. This is chapter one, there's a prologue before it, did you read it? Anyway, thanks for ...

thank you so much! and there is more story, I'll post it soon!